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Post by firedance on Sept 12, 2008 22:00:23 GMT -6
This is some poetry that I have written, some of you may have seen some in my signature. Any comments are welcome:
Almost Memory
I long to see what could have been What will never be To see your face Clear and fresh Unscarred by memory. I wish that you were by my side Your hand entwined in mine Visions of things That could have came If you had been with me. I want to show what’s in my heart A gift that no one knows Words unspoken Dreams laid by Other will try but never grasp. See me through my Father’s eyes Learn who I can become Judge me now for who I’ll be Not what others want you to see. I long to see what could have been The image of both you and me Dancing with the wind And not a single care about Unscarred by memory.
Shatters
Please don’t leave me here Standing in the shatters Of dreams past and gone You walk past with purpose Never glancing back And I do not understand How those dreams have shattered Slivers of glass tear at my bare feet Each one seeping painfully Wounding my heart The tormented music swirls around Trapping me within As I struggle to find To understand A reason for my heartbreak Dreams of you lay lifeless Broken in the shadows Word echo in the emptiness Places devoid of your spark I turn my back on the place that was yours And break away from the black I follow the path set before me Stepping gingerly towards the light New dreams surface steadily Now I move on readily
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Post by WildAtHeart on Sept 13, 2008 11:46:16 GMT -6
I love your poems. I write some too but not much. Your alot better than me.
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Post by firedance on Sept 15, 2008 21:25:39 GMT -6
Poetry isn't just words on a page, it's life, and your real emotions, music without a song. I've been writing it for a little over four year, since freshman year. Through poetry, the story of my life is written. The ones above are about a guy I have liked forever...
I would love to see one of yours, or anyone elses on here...
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Post by WildAtHeart on Sept 22, 2008 15:15:12 GMT -6
well idk where mine are. I wrote one bout my sis and my mom but i didn't make copies when i gave it to them
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